Hi, I'm sorry if this seems sudden or unwarranted, but I just wanted to drop by and point out a couple things I've noticed with Date. I'm not super versed in SenBasa canon, but it seems like your Date seems far more eager to explain himself than I would expect. A lot of what he says reads like a background section of an application, but in the first person -- it's less Date to me, and more a constant stream of you telling your readers "just so you know, he fights with katanas" "just so you know, he's from Japan" "just so you know he's a Sengoku period warlord". Because of that, I just don't feel the same energy and MANRY SPIRIT from him.

I understand the feeling of wanting people to know your character so you can get the most out of tags, but I think it would help a lot if you stepped back and let the information come out through the character and how he behaves, rather than making him give out information on the fly, if that makes sense.

Again, I apologize if this seems sudden or "too soon" considering Date hasn't been in S_C for very long, but I just wanted to bring it to your attention before any big problems arise. Good luck!